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Post by Createure on Dec 16, 2004 17:56:51 GMT 11
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Post by RALPHE on Dec 17, 2004 9:05:13 GMT 11
Hey creature, that has mighty potential in my opinion.
The strongest part would have to be the offbeat triballistic bongo/xylophone thing you have going there.
I definately think this element can be further emphasised by say, the beat.
The other element which I liked was the "chemical brothers" sounding arpeggiod synth you have at the end section.
The first few bars of the song kept my interest, but kind of nodded off at the main melodic bit. It kinda sounded too softsynth, computerised and midi if you know what i mean. The melody wasn't too catchy either in my opinion.
I think the other let down was that you changed ideas too often. The key to breakbeat is simplicity and a few basic STRONG (shake'yo'booty) elements.
Hence, I think you should emphasise the bongo bit and make that the focal point. Then, maybe give a more broken beat (Aphex Twin type) rhythm to the song (maybe as fillers). Still keep it 4x4 breakbeat but have more off an upbeat twisted element to the drums. Twisted is good.
A touch of vocals would have made the song too. And add a few darker sounding elements. Dark is good.
I would be interested to give this one a makeover with your permission, I would love to have my cheeky greasy hands on this and have a play.
If you would like that, email me rwengle-at-hotmail-dot-com
I will need to know what sequencer you use, and maybe have you upload samples / instrument parts in their song entirity.
(Ie. whole song but drums only as one wave file, then have whole song but synth only as one wave file, then have whole song but bongos only as another wave file etc.)
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Post by Createure on Dec 17, 2004 22:57:48 GMT 11
Cheers for the review mate, bloody comliment having any of it associatec with the bros. I would love you to get your greasy mits on it, i reckon you could do a lot with it having heard your other stuff, but probley not before january for variouse reasons. Vocals would be quite tricky for me cos no one i knows can sing for nuts, i could go for darker talking (faithless kinda thing) or i could mix and mash some vocals up a bit for fun. Oh yeah, i'm using logic on a really shitty mac btw have you had the hotmail inbox upgrade, (i guess so) cos if not 3-4 wav's are gonna be a bit of a problem  |
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Post by RALPHE on Dec 19, 2004 17:42:58 GMT 11
its a good track. have a play some more, and when u abbsolluutelyyy run out of ideas etc.. then hand it over to me  ur rite, we will worry about it after jan, (being new years etc and all) and concentrate on it then. it will be on my list of projects to do |
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Post by Createure on Dec 19, 2004 20:47:40 GMT 11
kk, great, have a great christmas/new years etc.
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Post by Createure on Mar 14, 2005 20:10:12 GMT 11
Check it out folks, a couple of new tracks for ya'll to listen to D+R - similar to my usual, bit heavier than normal though. D+P - downright weird but great fun to make, and it never fails to make me laugh when i listen to it www.soundclick.com/bands/8/createuremusic.htmsry I ain't bin around much, I've been soooo busy, u still interested in revamping my chaotic work ralphe? |
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Post by RALPHE on Mar 15, 2005 11:35:32 GMT 11
drop and roll has some very interesting elements and ideas which could definately be developed other pples comments on this one? i cant remem how "chaotic" sounded, as that was last year when u showed me it so i'll have to hear it again to refresh my slack memory... but please feel free to send me any material u mite want revamping. PM me or email rwengle@hotmail.com if u can upload each instrument part as a seperate mp3 file somewhere thatd be great  |
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Post by Createure on Mar 16, 2005 23:18:28 GMT 11
If you've got a gmail account i can send the parts to you as attachments, i dunno how much space you get on free hotmail accounts but gmail is much much bigger.
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Post by RALPHE on Mar 17, 2005 8:29:34 GMT 11
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Post by Createure on Mar 18, 2005 1:05:55 GMT 11
You need an invite, I'll send you one later. |
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Post by RALPHE on Mar 20, 2005 6:46:17 GMT 11
ive set up an account and sent u a PM
remove REMOVETHISSPAMBLOCK out off address
rwengleREMOVETHISSPAMBLOCK@gmail.com
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